Yesterday I lost my mind.The singing inspector came to our school. His name was Raymond he was wearing huge knikerbockers and socks .He looked like a hunting man .He has a red face and blue eyes and golden curly hair.He is the most hateful man in the universe.
do you know what he did to us I will tell you he called us to come to the big room.Then we had to do this do rah me things then he called charles and Benny then it was my turn I sang on the modelater I sang a nice song .
I so some children that I know the inspector called Gladys,Armstrong,and another girl.Then I so Gladys shaking nervously hen when the inspector talked I felt hash for those kids.But nah they were fine .
Rose, you have described what happened in the class, but you have said very little about your character's feelings during this time. Please make sure you edit your post carefully. Check your punctuation and spelling, especially in the second and third paragraph.
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